Sunday, February 2, 2014

Why Ten Little Pages Scare the HELL Out Of Me!! – The Little Engine That Could


I have rewritten my novel 3 times, the first ten pages of my novel 7 times, I have rewritten my first page 12 times, I have rewritten my first paragraph 21 times, and I have rewritten my first line 31 times. Don’t believe me? I have the proof, I keep all of my deleted work.  I have bled all over these pages and now all I see is red.  Why have I not simply tightened the tourniquet and stitched her up? Fear.

Over and over I read, “There is only one item in your book more important than the first chapter, the first paragraph.  There is only one item more important than the first paragraph, the first line.”  I have also read, heard, and digested the fact that my dream will live or die by the first ten pages. One dream and one chance, and five to ten pages to make it come true. If an industry wished to force a perfectionist into suicide, the writing world has found the key. 

Fortunately, in the last month I forced myself to start to learn one thing….. ‘The Little Engine That Could’ is one of the most profound books of all time.  It teaches a principle that is lacking in so many facets of advice, you have to ‘think I can’ to make it up the hill.  Confidence, when paired with self-actualization, will get better results than fear and apprehension. Focusing on this prospective is helping me and I hope it will help you….. Believe in yourself and truly think you can!

Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Spying: Literary Style


    After pouring through websites, books, and lecture transcripts I noticed an interesting fact about the interworking’s of the publishing world.  Everyone must be a spy and the spying comes full circle.  Before you jump into the semantics about using the world spying I will mention that “research” could be used in its place, if you wish to be that polite and boring.  No matter which term you prefer there is no getting around the action.  When it comes to success in this field spying is the golden key to most doors, here’s how:

 

Writers:

1.    Spy on Other Writers

 

It started at an earlier age when Pokey Puppy stole their heart and Black Beauty broke it, writers are readers.  They didn’t know it then but as the peanut butter coated fingers turned pages and the wide eyes ran over the text their minds were eavesdropping and cataloging everything about the book.  Writers are expected to read as many books in their genera as possible and this is what their spying on:

 

-         Story Development

-         Point of view

-         Reading level

-         Sentence structure

-         Voice

The next step is to spy on other writer’s career paths and seek the answers to these questions. 

-         How did they find inspiration?

-         Who helped them in their writing journey?

-         Who was their agent?

-         Who was their editor?

-         Who was their publisher?

-         How long did they struggle before getting that “Yes”?

-         What are they working on now?

 

2.    Spy on Agents

Agents are vital to success.  Yes, there are stories of the odd man out who represented themselves and made it big, but there is a reason we all know the same stories, they are few and far between.  A good agent offers a leg up that is well worth the small %15 percent they take. (ok that rant is over) Regardless the educated writer understands that the best book deals typically go to writers who have the best agents…….. and how are these agents acquired (besides writing a killer book and query of course)?  SPYING.  To get a yes from an agent you have to understand them.  This knowledge helps build the perfect query and ensure time isn’t wasted barking up the wrong tree.  Here’s a short list of the things the “industry” suggests to spy on when it come to the Agent:

-         What they represent

-         Who they represent

-         What they crave in a next project

-         Are they good at what they do

-         Do they treat their clients well

-         What are their submission guidelines

-         How they rank among their peers

-         What are their tastes

-         What have they said in interviews

-         What have they said in seminars

-         What have they said on Twitter, on Facebook

*This is the short list, but you get the idea.

 

Who Agents Spy On:

          In my humble opinion, which is very humble based on the fact that I am a writer not an agent, the success of an agent is made in four parts.  Relationships, sell, spy, and apply the knowledge gained by spying to sell.  Here’s a short list on who they keep tabs on:

-         Editors (collect information on both their private and professional lives)

-         Publishers

-         Other Agents

-         Readers

-         Writers

-         Social trends / media

 

Who Editor’s Spy On:

-         Other Editors

-         Their Publishers

-         Other Publishers

-         Trends in the Markets

-         Readers

Who the Publishers Spy On:

-         Readers

-         Other publishers

-         Self-publishing establishments

-         The e-book trade

-         Trends and media

 

The circle of Spying is then completed with the individuals that all this work geared towards.   The final piece is the Readers, who undeniably spy on the writers.

 

Readers à   Writers à   Agents à  Editors à Publishers à Readers

 

In short, if you’re preparing to enter this crazy world better get ready to put your search engines to the test…. Thank goodness for the internet!    

 

Thursday, January 16, 2014

Fear, First Novel, and American Idol


            There is a lot of fear that goes into writing a first novel.  We all pretend it is a fear of rejection.  It’s not.  What truly keeps us up at night is the unknown.  As writers we are bias of our own work much as a mother is to their child.  We spawned our tale from a place that is at once private and venerable, our imagination.  The words we put to paper are memorized.  The characters live in our heads and interact with every facet of our fleshed lives. We cannot be the judge of our own work, no more than a mother can judge the beauty of her offspring and this insights fear. 

Is my writing the best in human history?

Is my writing good?

Is my writing ok?

Are they going to be disgusted?

Will they laugh as they hit send on the form rejection letter?

In the past few days, as I put the final touches on my manuscript, I have wondered these things.  Tonight I am tortured by them even more thanks to American Idol.  No, that is not a typo.  American Idol has forced me question my worth as a writer. 

Everyone’s favorite episodes to watch are the first few, myself included.  These segments draw so many of us in because they feature talentless self-deluded individuals making fools of themselves.  These poor souls have a dream and they are unable or unwilling to hear their inabilities.  Many of them have family waiting in the hallway cheering them on as their hearts are broken, family that no doubt told them they had voices that could make angels envious.  Contestant after contestant lists off the vocal training they have had or musical schools they have attended.  Much as we spend hundreds of hours doing editing and research.
In previous times I would watch a grown man squawk off key dribble and laugh.  Tonight I didn’t.  Tonight I lived vicariously through them as the judges said no, suggested they stick with their day jobs, or giggled behind papers. 

I am about to approach my “American Idol” moment and I may squawk, but better to be off key than to do nothing at all.